題目：Online shopping is now replacing shopping in store. Do you think it is positive or negative development? 網購和實體店，你更支持哪個?
范文：
Such is nature to own what our hearts desire that is why many modern people like to spend their hardly earned money on their favorite goods. The contrivance of the Internet has profoundly revolutionized modern people’s option of consumption in many aspects. People have been debating the pros of cons of on-line shopping without reaching any definite agreement. Personally speaking, the merits of shopping on line prevail over its possible demerits.
開頭寫出當代社會人們傾向于消費，尤其是年輕人傾向的網上進行消費。對于是網購，還是逛商場進行線下消費更好，人們已經爭論很久，作者認為網購的好處遠遠大于它的弊端。
Seen from the positive aspects, many benefits could be gained by selecting and buying our favorites on line. The most glaring merit is that on-line shopping not only surmounts the geographical barrier，economizes great amounts of time, but also improves the flexibility of consumption. In this sense, those who select on-line shopping have more time to embark on more worthwhile things such as focusing on working or building up physique. Another advantage coming from on-line consumption is that it adds spice to our dull routine of daily life. A case in point is that a lot of fashionable ladies take pleasure in browsing various on-line shops, comparing different prices and bargaining with the owners of on-line shops. They usually end up buying their desirable goods. Last，on-line shopping will exert a beneficial influence on one’s financial budget due to the fact that on-line shops, in most cases, do not need to rent spacious places or employing many salesgirls, therefore, the price of on-line merchandise is, comparatively speaking, economical and reasonable, which indicates that we can buy more desirable goods even though we are hard-pressed for money.
從積極的方面來看，在網上選擇和購買我們的最愛可以獲得很多好處。最明顯的優點是網上購物不僅超越地理屏障,節約大量的時間,但也提高了消費的靈活性。從這個意義上說，那些選擇網上購物的人有更多的時間去從事更有價值的事情，比如集中精力工作或鍛煉身體。網上消費的另一個好處是，它為我們枯燥的日常生活增添了樂趣。一個很好的例子是，很多時尚女士喜歡瀏覽各種各樣的網上商店，比較不同的價格，和網上商店的老板討價還價。他們通常會購買他們想要的商品。最后,網上購物將施加有益的影響一個人的財務預算因為在線商店,在大多數情況下,不需要租寬敞的地方或雇傭很多的收入,因此,網上商品的價格,相對而言,經濟、合理的,這表明我們可以購買更多的商品。
Problems, however, inevitably ensue. On-line shopping is a two-edged weapon which can be used equally for good or evil. One possible demerit is that many on-line advertisements are full of flowery phrases and empty promises, therefore, consumers might be fooled into buying counterfeited goods. Many stories concerning on-line consumption fraud could justify my worry. Even worse，it is highly possible that some young consumers might spend money like water on their favorite goods on line out of the reason of seizing the chances of discount, in this case, on-line buying will impose much pressure upon some unwise consumers economically.
然而，問題不可避免地隨之而來。網上購物是一把雙刃劍，既可以用來做好事，也可以用來做壞事。一個可能的缺點是，許多網上廣告充滿了華麗的詞句和空洞的承諾，因此，消費者可能被騙購買假冒商品。許多關于網上消費欺詐的故事可以證明我的擔心是有道理的。更糟糕的是,它使一些年輕的消費者對他們最喜歡的商品揮金如土,在這種情況下,網上購買會把太多的壓力強加給一些不明智的消費者在經濟上。
Overall, what is of the utmost importance is to harness the merits of on-line buying and discard its demerits. The government should be urged to strengthen the censorship of on-line ads. Meanwhile, it is the duty of every consumer to raise the awareness of wise consumption.
總的來說，最重要的是利用網上購物的優點，摒棄它的缺點。政府應該加強對網絡廣告的審查。同時，提高消費者的明智消費意識是每個消費者的責任。
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